Here I go
You asked to check your stuff, here it is:
00:00 - 00:28
Argh, it's horribly out of tune, it almost makes me want to alt+f4, but I hope it's only the intro. No offensive; but this really sounds crap (in my ears)
00:29 - 1:08
Okay, so finally your chords start playing some good tunes, and when the beat/percussion/bass comes in it actually sounds quite nice.
Maybe EQ the hihats a little bit, cuz they sound really sharp and high pitched.
The kick's got a good punch to it and the bass sounds nice, although it's a generic offbeat bass you here all the time.
1:09 - 1:37
A nice high square sound comes in (the melody?). Got nothing to say about it, it's pretty darn nice :)
1:37 - 1:50
Where did that sound go to? :O
Way to short to just leave it out like that. It just made the track feel better and then it somehow stops... bah
Oh shit, those out-of-tunes filtered chords again.. it really doesnt suit the track.
2:20 - 2:48
Yay, the melody pops back in :) nice.
Again, I think it's a little bit to short
2:49 - 3:17
Basic outro from here, yay
Overall it has a good sound.
To bad you put those chords in at the beginning and halfway; it ruines it :(
4/5 and 8/10
Haha I'll definitely change around those chords.. but thanks for the review!
Where did I hear this before?
Your lead-melody.. starting at 0:41..
oh yeah! It's on a Youtube video called 'Nice Melodies' from SoneeX.. and he said that they were midi-files..
Create your own lead in the future, plz.. dont use someone's other shizzle.
And also some other things:
- Your snare gets way to overused.
- Maybe add some off-beat hihat to it? It may make the song sound more energized.
- And the song is waaay to repetitive.. add some other things to it except only a melody that you stole off of Youtube.
Overall, it's an average song to my ears.. Don't know how this got over-all 2nd on NG, oh well..
4.20 / 5.00 (- 0.0021)
I did use the midi form SoneeX's video but this song was made when I only DJ'ed for 2 weeks so I had to use a midi file to learn how to make songs, also this is the only song that I have made that uses midi files, except for the remakes such as Now Your Gone. I know this is not my best work but I think its decent work for someone who DJ'ed for only two week. But stay tuned and I will have a better version of this song soon. And yea, I really dont know how this got to second place haha
Do it! Finish!! >:D
Luvin' it.. so finish it!
Can't say anymore then: FINISH IT! xD
I honestly don't know if I'll ever get around to finishing this.
I'll let you know if I do... :/
Yes Sir! :D
Like BeatSource stated, the percussion DOES remind of Safri Duo :)
I can definitely hear some Darude and Above & Beyond inspiration in there and I think that you've done a great job, although you state that this song is "far from perfect"
4.38 / 5.00 (+ 0.00082)
It is, if perfection was reachable, musicians wouldnt have a reason to keep making music cause they would be satisfied with their previews work ; )
Thanks for the nice review and vote and fav :P
Yesz! A remake of one of my fav songs! :D
I love it that you've mainly remixed the main part of the 2008 remake of the song, cuz.. in my opinion, that's the best part of the song.
I've been wanting myself to remix this song.. but I guess someone on NG has beaten me to it xD oh well.. I'll just have to step up my game :P
Love to hear more of you
Peace - DJ TnT
Mhm, I actually like the 2008 version more.
Submit your remix, I'd like to hear it! :D
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