Here I go
You asked to check your stuff, here it is:
00:00 - 00:28
Argh, it's horribly out of tune, it almost makes me want to alt+f4, but I hope it's only the intro. No offensive; but this really sounds crap (in my ears)
00:29 - 1:08
Okay, so finally your chords start playing some good tunes, and when the beat/percussion/bass comes in it actually sounds quite nice.
Maybe EQ the hihats a little bit, cuz they sound really sharp and high pitched.
The kick's got a good punch to it and the bass sounds nice, although it's a generic offbeat bass you here all the time.
1:09 - 1:37
A nice high square sound comes in (the melody?). Got nothing to say about it, it's pretty darn nice :)
1:37 - 1:50
Where did that sound go to? :O
Way to short to just leave it out like that. It just made the track feel better and then it somehow stops... bah
Oh shit, those out-of-tunes filtered chords again.. it really doesnt suit the track.
2:20 - 2:48
Yay, the melody pops back in :) nice.
Again, I think it's a little bit to short
2:49 - 3:17
Basic outro from here, yay
Overall it has a good sound.
To bad you put those chords in at the beginning and halfway; it ruines it :(
4/5 and 8/10
Haha I'll definitely change around those chords.. but thanks for the review!
Where did I hear this before?
Your lead-melody.. starting at 0:41..
oh yeah! It's on a Youtube video called 'Nice Melodies' from SoneeX.. and he said that they were midi-files..
Create your own lead in the future, plz.. dont use someone's other shizzle.
And also some other things:
- Your snare gets way to overused.
- Maybe add some off-beat hihat to it? It may make the song sound more energized.
- And the song is waaay to repetitive.. add some other things to it except only a melody that you stole off of Youtube.
Overall, it's an average song to my ears.. Don't know how this got over-all 2nd on NG, oh well..
4.20 / 5.00 (- 0.0021)
I did use the midi form SoneeX's video but this song was made when I only DJ'ed for 2 weeks so I had to use a midi file to learn how to make songs, also this is the only song that I have made that uses midi files, except for the remakes such as Now Your Gone. I know this is not my best work but I think its decent work for someone who DJ'ed for only two week. But stay tuned and I will have a better version of this song soon. And yea, I really dont know how this got to second place haha
Do it! Finish!! >:D
Luvin' it.. so finish it!
Can't say anymore then: FINISH IT! xD
I honestly don't know if I'll ever get around to finishing this.
I'll let you know if I do... :/
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